Try-Out: Sarah; ViridityMoon [APPROVED]

[Der König]

Try-out Role-Player: Viridity Moon
Try-out Character's Name: Sarah
Try-out Character's Race: Arrancar

[ViridityMoon]

Sarah was in the vast desert of Hueco Mundo. She could see nothing but sand and a small dot on the horizon she assumed to be Las Noches. She looked in the direction of what looked like a mountain, "I'll rest there for the night," she whispered. She began to sonido there, smiling. Could she have finally found a place to call home? She fell asleep as soon as she got into a crevice and laid down. She dreamed about her fiancé. They were both in their old home with three children. She hugged them over and over. After about ten minutes in the dream it turned into a nightmare, she had to watch in horror while her fiancé and their children were eaten by a hollow. She tried to reach for Senrinhana to save them, but it always seemed to be just out of reach. She awoke right when the hollow charged a cero and fired it at her family. She walked out of the crevice in the cave and looked at the horizon.

She squinted her eyes and saw a few dots. "Shit, my dream must have flared my reiatsu!" she yelled. It seemed to be around 4 hollow, Adjuchas level. Then she gripped her sword and sighed. They began to charge at her. "It seems I'll have to kill, even with how much I truly hate to." She began to sonido towards them. On her way she shed a tear. She stopped in front of the biggest. "Hello," she said, still gripping the green hilt of Senrinhana. "I don't enjoy fighting much, honestly. Don't make me hurt you." Then she pointed her sword at the bigger one of the four. "I assume your the leader, tell your friends to back down, please." She then flared her reiatsu in a warning.

[Der König]

At the sudden flare of reiatsu Anton's eyes snapped open, though the pale blue orbs saw nothing but darkness. Just seconds ago he had been asleep, though he was never one to sink too deep into slumber - his human life still haunted him, his military training forbid him to not pay attention to his surroundings - even when his body was in need of rest.

This raise of reiatsu certainly was something that needed immediate attention. Quick and smoothly Anton slid out of his bed, gracefully like a dancer and even though he had a mission to attend to did he turn around, making his bed until the silky smooth, white blanket resembled marble stone.

He glanced down on the bed one last time, his glance as cold as ice as the fingertips of his left hand brushed over the jagged scar running down his chin.

Mission.

Anton turned on his heels and walked towards the round door of his room, his feet touching the cold stone floor, though he paid it no mind. He had lived in colder places already, had to work in colder places, had to survive in colder places. This certainly was no problem.

Carefully he wrapped the fingers of his right hand around the handle of his door, pushing it open as silent as possible - there was no reason to alert the other Arrancar close-by.
If they had not been woken already.

Again his fingertips brushed over the scar as he closed the door behind himself, glancing at the direction the reiatsu was coming from... it had raised even more by now.
Quite interesting.

Certainly no time to waste anymore.

Luckily for him he already was suitable dressed. Not the uniform he preferred, but decent enough to investigate what was happening so close by. Anton huffed, the only sound that had passed his lips so far, before disappearing in a flash of sonido.

It was a matter of two minutes until he reached the scene, just as the biggest of the Hollows bulked upwards before snapping its head down towards the woman - most likely intending to swallow her down in one, big gulp.

The thing was too weak though, to weak to eat somebody at this level. Anton stopped a few feet away from the scene, the gust of air that surrounded him as he stopped down was whipping his chin-length, jet-black hair backwards and his eyes closed momentarily at the sand coming his way.
He loathed sand, rather would like it to snow here.

Anton huffed again, ignoring the two pair of eyes of the other Hollows looking his way as he again brushed his fingertips over the scar.

He would not help her, had absolutely no reason to do so. It was not his mission to save people and he had no personal intention to keep her alive. Though if those things...

They were coming his way. Two of them were insane enough to do so. Well fine... this action at least made it his business too. Anton's right hand brushed down his abdomen towards the black sash, freeing his black, leather gloves he had tied to his white robe. With no hurry in the world he pulled them on, even as one tail wrapped around his lean form did his expression of utter boredom not change. He huffed again as his right hand fist itself into the thin appendage, his grip fierce enough to make the being screech in pain and let go of its tight grip around him. Still not caring enough about all this Anton's grip tightened even more before his right arm swapped backwards, making the snake-like being lash out like a whip, before he brought it down heavily on the monkey hollow. The thing shrieked as its partner came down on it, flattening it against the sandy ground of the desert, the three, long, sharp horns crowning its head tearing into the skin of the snake - making them both disappear in a glittering sparkle.

Anton's expression had not changed the whole time and with eyes as cold as icicles did he return his glance onto the woman and her opponents, brushing his gloved fingertips against his chin as his head titled slightly.

[ViridityMoon]

Sarah felt another reiatsu signature behind her killing two of the hollow. She glanced back at the man and promised herself that she would introduce herself later. She put her sword back into it's scabbard, then summoned a vine clone and had it finish the other two off. It turned its arm into a thorn and lunged at them. In a split-second, the hollows masks' were gone. The clone had killed them with a strike to the head. Sarah looked over to the man and began to walk towards him. "Hello, my name is Sarah. What's your name?" she said as if nothing had happened. She then absorbed the clone walking behind her. Then she summoned her Tree of Eden. She picked two apples off of it and offered one to the man. Then she began to nibble on her's.

[Der König]

Try-out Profile Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 10/36

• General - Total: 4/12
  
• Thoroughness - 1/4
  
• Organization - 2/4
  
• Cleanliness - 1/4
  
  
• Character - Total: 2/12
  
• Originality and creativity - 1/6
  
• Character depth - 1/6
  
  
• Zanpakuto - Total: 4/12
  
• Originality and creativity - 3/6
  
• Zanpakuto depth - 1/6

Try-out Post Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 16/64

• Creativity - Total: 4/18
  
• Setting - 1/6
  
• Action scene - 1/6
  
• Character reaction - 2/6
  
  
• Grammar and Sentence Structure - Total: 5/16
  
• Punctuation - 2/4
  
• Sentence structure - 1/4
  
• Readability - 2/8
  
  
• Storytelling Ability - Total: 1/4
  
  
• Flow and Overall Structure - Total: 2/8
  
• Post flow - 1/4
  
• Post organization - 1/4
  
  
• General Detail - Total: 4/18
  
• Setting detail - 1/6
  
• Character action detail - 2/6
  
• Character interaction detail and integrity - 1/6

Total: 26 points.

Ranked: Competent
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