Try-Out: Elena Jacolleni; Diaveras [APPROVED]

[Der König]

Try-out Role-Player: Diaveras
Try-out Character's Name: Elena Jacolleni
Try-out Character's Race: Arranar

[Diaveras]

The halls were clear of arrancar, this was good as she felt best being unseen when she visited the doors of the people she had affections for. A simple hall matching a lot of the architecture of Las Noches. Pillars along the walls with lamp posts hanging from the middle of the sides of the pillars. nothing that really stood out, though. Aside from the very decorative carpet spread across the long hallway.

Elena was skipping along, a group of letters held behind her back by one hand. She came to a stop when the first door she was looking for came up. She smiled, letting out a light giggle, as she bent down and picked out a specific letter with a name on it. Slipping it beneath the door to be found later by the woman who owned this room. The letter was filled with words she felt the person should hear. It was the same with all the letters in her hand, all to people she found herself having trouble approaching directly with these feelings she had for them. But this was just fine with her, as long as these letters managed to brighten up a few people's days. The thought that it did made her feel good.

She stood from her knees and proceeded to hop through the hallway as she made her way to all the doors she was to slip these letters under. There were six left, though after ten minutes she was down to two. The second to last door and then she would be off to enjoy the rest of her day, however she saw fit. The dragons on her shoulders were not moving today, this was a disappointment to her. So she would have to find one of her affections, hopefully to spend the day together. Oh but in what fashion? anything would be fine with her though she had a personal favorite activity.

Thinking about it made her smile and blush slightly, the idea of just spending hours simply in the arms of someone, resting her head against a person's chest, preferably a woman's/ And just feeling the transition of warmth between the two of them. as she thought of this she closed her eyes, standing in the middle of the hallway and rubbing the tips of her fingers together. She now felt it that it was inevitable, she was going to find someone to spend a few hours cuddled up to and to, just silently taking comfort in their warmth. It sounded so nice. But now was not the time to day dream she moved to the next door and bent down on her knees, placing the letter on the ground and beginning to slide it under the door.

[Ravilin Asura]

One of the Espada paused in her walk down the long hallway watching the pink haired child slide a letter under a door. It seemed a strange way of interacting with someone. Taking in Elena's appearance a grin played on her features. There seemed to be a lot of child like arrancar lately. "Child, what're you doing?" The tone of her voice hinted at nothing. The Espada had the number seven sketched in delicate ink under her right eye. Trailing a hand through her luscious locks of obsidian coloured hair the Espada waited for the answer. Hunger was gnawing in her gut, wanting to torture the girl before her. The truth was that she fed off of terror which flowed from the weaker arrancar. Releasing some of her true power it trailed across the pair in a gentle caresses much like a lover would do to someone. The blue eyes were the same colour of the sky before a storm, so pale they could've been gray in colour. Slowly she took a step forward toward the small girl before her with a questioning look wondering if she'd be able to play with the arrancar.

"I'm the septmo Espada." The low growl of her voice would trail around Elena before she took another step forward comfortably pulling the smaller arrancar into her ample chest. "Would you care to play, little one?" The woman murmured, stroking a hand against the delicate jaw , the other arm securely around Elena's waist.

"Say yes won't you?"

[Diaveras]

The letter was slipped under the door with fair ease. She was thinknig of how the resident of this room would react to reading it and feeling a warmth in her chest when the tail wrapped around her leg constricted a bit, telling her something was approaching. She looked over to see none other than espada septimo, the tattoo clearly visible just beneath the woman's eye. The woman spoke to her, she didn't know whether or not to smile, she had never met this person before so she couldn't entirely assume her trustworthy. "Just delivering a few letters full of heart felt words to some special people." She said innocently, though some of these people were more than just special. Some she had gotten to know in intimate ways.

She stood to move before the espada grabbed her and Elena was pulled to the woman's chest. A bit of a blush would be visible on her face, the woman's arm wrapping around her waistline, hinting towards what she meant by the word play. Elena was a bit helpless like this, she clutched the last letter in her hand. This person before her.... felt unsafe. She may be trying not to show any of it, but Elena could feel it. Malice. Something she needed nothing to do with. Still she might as well lead this espada on. She took her free hand and gently stroked it along the woman's outer thigh. "I can play. Certainly." She said with a smile that she was faking. She'd not be caught in a trap, trust no one who you have just met. Something she felt was an appropriate lesson for herself and applicable in this moment.

She slid the letter into her pocket and brought her other hand to the woman's back, trailing her fingers along the spinal area. "A lot of people in this hall find it very enjoyable to play with me. Well, that is what they tell me anyway."

[Ravilin Asura]

Try-out Profile Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 28/36

• General -Total: 11/12
  
• Thoroughness - 3/4
  
• Organization - 4/4
  
• Cleanliness - 4/4
  
  
• Character - Total: 8/12
  
• Originality and creativity - 4/6
  
• Character depth - 4/6
  
  
• Zanpakuto - Total: 9/12
  
• Originality and creativity - 5/6
  
• Zanpakuto depth - 4/6

Try-out Post Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 40/64

• Creativity - Total: 10/18
  
• Setting - 3/6
  
• Action scene - 4/6
  
• Character reaction -3/6
  
  
• Grammar and Sentence Structure - Total: 11/16
  
• Punctuation - 4/4
  
• Sentence structure - 3/4
  
• Readability - 4/8
  
  
• Storytelling Ability - Total: 3/4
  
  
• Flow and Overall Structure - Total: 6/8
  
• Post flow - 3/4
  
• Post organization - 3/4
  
  
• General Detail - Total: 10/18
  
• Setting detail - 3/6
  
• Character action detail - 4/6
  
• Character interaction detail and integrity - 3/6

Total: 68

Rank: Master +

[Ravilin Asura]

New try out total is 7,000P.

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