Try-Out: Maeter ‘P’, Maeter P [APPROVED]

[Ravilin Asura]

• Try-out Role-Player: Maeter ‘P’
  
• Try-out Character's Name: Maeter P
  
• Try-out Character's Race: Arrancar

[Maeter P]

A Lazy Afternoon

She wasn't satisfied, not one bit. Opening her eyes, they gazed around the dim lit room. Shafts of artificial sunlight wrapped around the curtains and pierced the gloom. They moved with the wind, dancing on the floor, highlighting the heavy mist that had enveloped her and her companion. It had all started off so nicely, so vigorously, and yet that’s all it was. A good start but a poor finish. The breeze snaked its way past the curtains, and stirred up the dust around them, flowing freely over her naked body. The shiver of a chill, coursed through her soul, causing an instant grab for the covers. She ripped them off her failed lover, who lay completely asleep with a smile on his face. Wrapping the soft fabric around her body, their cool touch rubbed against her nipples, stimulating a short burst of innocent pleasure. It was the small things that counted and that grin of his felt like an insult, when in truth it was a compliment to her skill.

Regardless, while he lay fully appeased and sated, all Maeter could do was feel more and more frustrated. Standing up, she walked around the debris that littered the floor upon their entrance several hours ago, when Hueco Mundo's gorgeous moon pierced Las Noches's great dome. It was up there they had met, both marvelling at the pure silence that encompassed their world. Far off in the distance, they knew that death was the law in those parts, but that to in itself was pure. Surprisingly, Noel, despite how he looks had the mind of a scholar, and managed to greatly pique Maeter’s interest with his ideas. They both found beauty in each other and in the one law that governs their world. Survival of the fittest, an absolute law with very few exceptions and loopholes. Only those deemed strong enough, fast enough, intelligent enough were allowed to feel the incredible elation one got through evolution. Whilst he wasn’t special compared to the other numero’s the fact that Noel talked about it with such confidence, was what won her over.

His desire was plain for all to see, his body soon followed. As Maeter dragged him down to her quarter's within one of the great many towers of Las Noches. Clothes were torn, as they pressed up against each other, eager to cup, eager to grope every inch of their perfectly designed bodies. Stumbling, throwing, lifting, pinning, Maeter was at the arrancar's full and total control, to a certain extent. She was a power bottom, and whilst she loved being the one in control, she never minded letting someone else hold the reins once in a while. His thrusts were powerful, constantly pounding as she was pressed tightly against the walls and floor of her room. His body was something of an homage to the gods the humans worshipped. Completely stacked, defined, a work of art made flesh. These reasons and his stirring cock were what filled Maeter with such anticipation and fire.

Tip-toeing, Maeter collected the torn fabrics that lay a strewn across the floor, picking each up with delicate care so as not to rip them further. Some were more or less intact, others on the other hand, had been...used. It seemed that Noel had always had one fantasy when it came to being able to fuck Maeter. Bondage. He claimed that he had been practicing on the many numero sluts in the castle, but Maeter felt that was a bit of a white lie. Whilst his bonds were good and tight, there was no feeling of being forced into humiliating positions. She expected him to tie her arms and head together. To restrict the movements of her legs so that no matter how much she couldn’t take the pleasure, she would be able to do nothing about it. However Maeter could also easily unravel the knots herself, which further ruined the mood and the fantasy for her. His overall clumsiness and lack of stamina overshadowed that first impression she had of him. But it wasn't the end, the young numero wasn't going to be leaving the room until she was satisfied, no matter how much pain his cock was to go through.

Dropping everything by her bin, Maeter looked back upon her room and the sleeping hulk that lay in it's centre. Despite his many shortcomings, there was a certain charm. To the beast. His feral nature was a brilliant selling point, one which, on remembering turned some of Maeter's frustration into satisfaction. The light from behind the curtains had gotten brighter, with the sun's light arcing over her toy's body, causing shadows to define his enormous muscles. A hunger grew inside Maeter at the sight, and without a moment's hesitation, she dropped the sheet and walked over to the man naked. She didn't have the time to enjoy the lavish material of her carpet, which tickled every nerve on her feet as she walked.

Everything about her room was designed to entice, invigorate, and heighten the euphoria of being turned on. From the bed sheets and their silk-like texture, to the curtains themselves, thin and light, so that whoever may walk behind them be haloed and defined by pure light. But she didn't want any of that now, no Noel's cock was there, hung, rested and ready for another round. She realised as she mounted his chest and bent over to it, her groin pressed up against his face. That he was getting a wake up that no other numero had gotten from her. The thought gave her a wicked grin, as she began to caress his member and feel both him and it, stir.

Her voice purred as he growled himself awake, her lips moving with delicacy. As she spoke her voice sounded like it was thick and coated with honey.

"Good morning Noel"

With that she took him into herself, and the gasp that escaped his mouth, the clenching of his hands upon her hips had already assured Maeter, that this was going to be more than a good start.

* * *

Sweat glistened on her skin, her chest rose and fell heavily, her breath struggling to catch up with the demand that had been placed upon it. Her thighs, wrists, neck and breasts were sore to the touch. All of her holes felt raw, stretched and aching, in a good way. Sitting up, the silk bed sheets, sticking to her back, slowly pulled off of her back. The sensation felt akin to running water trickling quickly down her spine. She placed a hand on Noel’s thigh, lightly stroking near his cock as she listened to the sound of his hard breathing. Closing her eyes, Maeter let a cooling breeze from the window wrap around her, the invisible force’s many fingers tugging and pulling at her skin. Each one of them lightly caressing her overly sensitive body. Smiling, but without turning her head, Maeter hummed to Noel;

“So my little scholar, have you woken up yet?”

[Ravilin Asura]

It was often that his mistress would want to devour every part of him with her lust. It was natural for Maeter to demand sex from him. Noel had found himself laying on the bed once more the silk coiling against the soft flesh of his back side. A light growl of pleasure and pain escaped his mouth, Noel had found it strange that Maeter woke him up in the manner she had but beyond that there was no complaints on his party. The green eyes held only delight despite being tender, making love with his master was one of the better pleasures which life seemed to hold. Noel was willing to offer his pound of flesh to her at any moment. Passion was the one flame in life the burned the brightest, passion covered many things. In a languid manner the arrancar slowly pushed himself into a sitting position, energy thrumming across his well tanned chest. The muscles were well defined, the faint sheen of sweat trailing across it in a dusky manner. The bright green eyes moved over the bare form of his master as he smile the white teeth showing clearly. "Mon cheri you've always known how to fuck so well." The green eyes were bright with amusement his voice rich with the french accent of the country he was born from. Noel had thick locks that brushed down his face against his handsome features. Grasping it gently he tied the hair together in a loose knot so that it wouldn't be all over.

Moving in a delicate prance motion, Noel slipped his arms around Maeter, nuzzling her neck sweet, placing a kiss on her jaw line. "Mon cheri." His voice held a affectionate note it. This was a woman who nations would go to war for. Such a fine specimen and he was the one who got to take her body as his own. This was the woman that no one would ever tame. Stepping back Noel enjoyed the sight of her body for a moment basking in the smooth portions before nodding his head. He needed to head off soon, though he was exhausted. Mae liked to ride him until he was tired. Hell it was an effort to stand there as straight as he did. Noel went down on his knees slowly, nuzzling his mouth against Maeter's thigh in affection. Nothing sexual but how he showed his respect for the esteemed woman. Gently Noel kissed the white flesh with a growl rumbling low in his throat from the sweet smell of her sex near his face. Lightly he licked his tongue up the thigh ending just outside her lips before pulling back with a playful look. Rising to his feet Noel pulled Maeter close, kissing her hard. His mouth covering hers while his hands played across the ample flesh of her bottom. After a few minutes of kissing and caressing the goddess before him Noel withdrew.

"I have my duties to attend but then I will be yours for more use shall you need it, madame." Noel purred.

[Maeter P]

His accent was thick, the sound of it resounding in her ears was quite pleasing. It had it's own boom, echo which subtly would fill the room no matter what words escaped his lips. Smiling, Maeter opened her eyes and turn her head to her servant, when his arms wrapped around her. The smell of his sweat and BO was strong and musky. He smelt like a man should, raw, naked and fierce. Grinning she let a playful moan escape her lips as his brushed along her jaw. Even if he was kissing bone, not being able to feel the sensation was one in itself. It left it to her imagination, as to how wet his lips were, how light they touched. She let her hand run along his slick muscled chest feeling his heavy heart pounding beneath his flesh.

She brought her hand, he fingers to her lips and licked. The salty taste of his sweat tingled her tongue, mimicking the sensation that was running up her leg as Noel's wet tongue licked it. Maeter felt her heart and breath quicken as his head brought itself ever closer to her cunt. The excitement started making her wet, hungry even. Yet when he pulled back, and watched her with those smiling eyes, Maeter knew what he was thinking.

“Oh my little french toad, there should be only one duty in your mind”

She had put on a mock French accent, one which came out quite well. For a moment, Maeter thought it was time for a little roleplay, but one quick glance at Noel could tell her that he wouldn’t be able to last a full round. He leant in, forcing a long kiss onto her which Maeter didn’t enjoy. In the heat of the moment he was allowed to do what he pleased, but now with nothing in sight, his affection only annoyed her. Sighing Maeter pushed him away from her as she stood up and walked to the heap of torn clothes. Her long hair brushed and tickled the back of her knees, covering her bottom with it’s thick brush. She sifted through the clothes and found her target, a extremely transparent thong, which she slipped on quickly.

“But I know where you are coming from, the mundane tasks we are given have always been strictly enforced…”

She broke off as she looked at herself in the mirror, admiring her body with the lazy attitude she always did when she woke up after sex. Leaning forward, she pulled at her cheeks inspecting for any spots. Her breasts shook ever so slightly, her nipples erect from Noel’s touch, pointed directly to the floor.

“And tardiness is never accepted, unless one has a good reason...”

She turned on her heels quickly and walked up to Noel, placing a hand on his chest and pushing him till his back thudded against the wall. Her smile was gone, instead her demanding cool expression had returned. Staring the beast straight in the eye, Maeter’s hand slapped him round the face hard and quick.

“Next time don’t presume you have leave to force kisses onto me”

For that split second Maeter’s eyes looked full of death, her hand still rested on Noel’s face. The accent had dropped entirely, and Maeter could see the fear in Noel’s eyes. It was a bit unfair to have done it, being a fresh new toy, but he had to learn somehow. Clenching her hand on his face, Maeter let her other hand drop to his cock and began stroking it. She pressed her breasts against his chest, feeling the quickened pace of his heart in fear, and forced a kiss onto him.

“So you better give them a damn good reason other than me..”

She purred in an icy tone as slowly she kissed down his body before wetting her lips and taking his aroused penis into her mouth.

[Ravilin Asura]

Try-out Profile Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 29/36

• General -Total: 11/12
  
• Thoroughness - 3/4
  
• Organization - 4/4
  
• Cleanliness - 4/4
  
  
• Character - Total: 10/12
  
• Originality and creativity - 5/6
  
• Character depth - 5/6
  
  
• Zanpakuto - Total: 8/12
  
• Originality and creativity - 4/6
  
• Zanpakuto depth - 4/6

Try-out Post Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 56/64

• Creativity - Total: 16/18
  
• Setting - 5/6
  
• Action scene - 5/6
  
• Character reaction -6/6
  
  
• Grammar and Sentence Structure - Total: 13/16
  
• Punctuation - 4/4
  
• Sentence structure - 4/4
  
• Readability - 5/8
  
  
• Storytelling Ability - Total: 4/4
  
  
• Flow and Overall Structure - Total: 7/8
  
• Post flow - 3/4
  
• Post organization - 4/4
  
  
• General Detail - Total: 16/18
  
• Setting detail - 5/6
  
• Character action detail - 5/6
  
• Character interaction detail and integrity - 6/6

Total: 85

Rank: Supreme-

[Ravilin Asura]

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