TryOut: Sângeroasă Răzbunare; 3.14159265 [APPROVED]

[Ravilin]

Try-out Role-Player: 3.14159265
Try-out Character's Name: Sângeroasă Răzbunare
Try-out Character's Race: Arrancar

[Sangi]

The Decima Espada is avoiding her job, as usual.

Sangi is perched up on one of the higher roofs of Las Noches, looking down on the city silently and watching the other Arrancar going about their business... Always so busy, so hasty, so... boring. Nothing interesting to do, least of all her job, and so she avoids it altogether, perched up here as she always is when she has such a predicament. She reaches up, brushing a stray hair from her face solemnly, wishing that something would happen to break this mindless tedium.

she doesn't want to work, but she wants something to happen at least... She stands, stretching out and jumping down from the roof, hands slipping into her pockets as she makes her way to one of Las Noches' equivalent to dive bars, smirking a bit as she steps inside.

[Ravilin]

Ulfsaar was a busy beast, oh yes. He championed the title of Warden, Las Noches's Warden. The great Lord of Hueco Mundo had bestowed upon him such an honor due to Ulfsaar's ferocious determination, staunch will and effective method. He had rescued Las Noches innumerable times and yesterday's display of gallantry had added to the pile.

And now, at this very moment, Ulfsaar was being repaid for his feat. His impenetrable master, the Lord of Hueco Mundo, had bestowed upon him a night full of pleasure, a night full of drinking. He had arrived at Cooky's Pub, the best place around Las Noches, but hours prior, an infinite thirst and a bottomless tab to his name. Oh yes, he would enjoy this night.

He now sat on a couch that stood against the far right wall of this bountiful establishment. Cooky's Pub was a huge, two story brewery. It was quite busy tonight, the loud shouts and moans of the drunken dwarfing any silence that would be. The couch was of red color and made of soft, cozy fur. He was laying on his side, covering the entire piece of furniture. Ulfsaar was an Arrancar of immense stature, almost 7'0" and 560 lbs. He bore a large, vulgar visage. His long, brown hair cascaded down his large, abrasive right shoulder. He bore a rather extravagant yet hardened belly, which protruded from his open-style white jacket. His legs were thick, almost like tree trunks. They dangled carelessly over the far end of the couch. Surrounding him in all directions, Ulfsaar had a variety of lovely female Arrancar. Some of light tone, some of dark complexion...and some just outright nose-bleeding gorgeous. Yea, this was the life. In his right hand he clenched a rather lavish, golden mug. A delicious, intoxicating brew swished clockwise as he swirled the cup round. He raises his right hand to take a modest gulp of his strong beverage, when his attention is caught by the presence of a newcomer.

As he turned his giant head to the right, his long brown hair disappearing down his back, Ulfsaar's gaze is met with a tiny creature. It was quite small and almost seemed so fragile as to barely be able to walk. From what he could tell, she was of female gender. And that eye-patch. What did it hide? Quite an interesting little thing.

Ulfsaar grins. His sharp molars glisten under the dim lights. He then raises his mug up high in hopes he would catch the newcomer's attention. He then grumbles "Hey there, kid! Wanna drink!? Hic!" He lets out a sickening, almost greenish gas from his opened gape. Eww.

[Sangi]

Of all the times that the Decima could have chosen, of all the bars in Las Noches, she had to pick the one where the ogre had decided to set up shop for the night. The diminutive girl hears his calling to her, her eyebrow raising slightly as the voice, laden with drink and foul smells so horrid that the eye can even pick them up, falls like a slimy worm into her ear, unpleasant and unwanted, but not something to be ignored easily. She could probably take the Warden if she has to, but that'd be a pain in the ass, and she doesn't like pains in the ass.

And so the Decima turns to him, single amethyst eye taking in his unkempt form, the stomach, and the women... Disgusting, she thinks, barely suppressing a sneer at the ridiculousness of the vision. The man obviously had no pride in his appearance, and the women around him were likely either bought, commanded, or were there hoping to gain something for themselves through association, unlikely as this was to occur with this brute. He invited her to drink though, and though he himself was right disgusting, the swill in this place wasn't completely shit, and she'd take him up on that, if he was lucky enough.

"Well, that depends on a couple things!" She calls out, eye flashing quietly. "Who's buying, and whether you think you can outdrink me!" She grins, inwardly laughing at the spectacle... Guy likely didn't know who he was dealing with, honestly... But hey, fun is fun, and if all else fails she has her backup plan. "Hell, let's make it interesting!" No man could resist a temptation like betting, especially when drunk. She was in a small place now, hardly the center of attention... but this one person? that she can handle. "I drink you down, and I get to cut that hair of yours, You win... well, if you win, then let's just say that you'll be sleeping well tonight."

[Ravilin]

Try-out Profile Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 14/18

• General -Total: 4/6
  
• Thoroughness - 1/2
  
• Organization - 1/2
  
• Cleanliness - 2/2
  
  
• Character - Total: 5/6
  
• Originality and creativity - 3/3
  
• Character depth - 2/3
  
  
• Zanpakuto - Total: 5/6
  
• Originality and creativity - 3/3
  
• Zanpakuto depth - 2/3

Try-out Post Evaluation Section - Sub-Total: 19/32

• Creativity - Total: 5/9
  
• Setting - 2/3
  
• Action scene - 1/3
  
• Character reaction -2/3
  
  
• Grammar and Sentence Structure - Total: 5/8
  
• Punctuation - 1/2
  
• Sentence structure - 1/2
  
• Readability - 3/4
  
  
• Storytelling Ability - Total: 1/2
  
  
• Flow and Overall Structure - Total: 4/4
  
• Post flow - 2/2
  
• Post organization - 2/2
  
  
• General Detail - Total: 4/9
  
• Setting detail - 1/3
  
• Character action detail - 1/3
  
• Character interaction detail and integrity - 2/3

Total: 33/50

Ranked: Competent
[33 - 38 stat points]

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